Is this okay?

Is This okay ~ Checkered Luna (a short love story)

she slowly made her way through the dance floor slowly and elegantly using one hand to push her way through the crowd of couples while her other gripped the side of her dress sure not to let it drag. The lights shined on the amazing white dress with blood red trim her mind raced over every possibility that this plan would even work but sure enough it had. The boy she had loved ever since childhood was sitting right there and mind you shes is now 17 almost out of high school and yet she never gave up on him. They grew up together he was her best friend ever since 1st grade maybe even before that but she knew she wouldn't let anymore time slip by her pace slowed as she came to stand in front of him. He looked up from his vans which i find kinda cute that a guy would wear vans with a tuxedo ;) but she paid no mind to it he always wore vans or toms with everything. The boy stared at the beautiful girl before him he smiled grinned at her with the cute little grin she knew belonged to her and only her that little half grin where his smile was kinda crooked and off to the side looking it always made him look so young and innocent the girls' thought process was cut off by his voice. "You look beautiful tonight Hailey" she smiled sweetly at him her eyes shining bright Grey almost Silver. He smiled back just as sweetly his eyes shining a beautiful Chocolate brown "Thanks Johnathan you look very Handsome in your Tuxedo...and Vans" they both laughed and giggled at the little inside joke about Vans Hailey stopped laughing and looked Johnathan in the eyes "Do you mind coming outside with me for a quick min?" Johnathan looked out on the dance floor where his supposed girlfriend was talking with some other guys rolled his eyes and looked back at Hailey "sure i'd rather hang with you anyway" Hailey put out her hand and led him out to the courtyard where a few couples sat on some benches. Hailey bent down and took off her heels as they walked on the grass together. They stay quiet mostly a few jokes here and there and the occasional glances at each other but nothing more until they finally both sat down in the middle of the field of grass looking up at the stars. Johnathan looked over at Hailey and spoke very casually "you know i have been thinking alot about things you know like how me and you have been friends for so long and we use to be so close til high school i always wondered why we drifted" Hailey looked down and spoke "i figure it as my fault you tried talkin to me alot but i always tried to stay out of your way but i've been thinking alot about us to."
Johnathan grabbed Hailey's hand and used his other hand to make her look at him "Hailey don't ever push yourself away from me your my best friend you always will be and you know something ever since 3rd grade i've had the biggest crush on you" Hailey looked at him her eyes shimmering "you never seemed interested so i never tried to ask you out which is why i always just settled for the girls that asked me out but my heart has always been set on you" Hailey sat there and just looked at him feeling like she was going to cry and finally just said something "is this okay?" Johnathan looked alittle confused "is what okay?" he asked she looked at him tears rolling down "is it okay for me to love you like is it okay for me wanting to be in your arms forever is it okay for me to feel so strongly towards you? is it okay?" she asked. Johnathan smiled widely "Hailey i've been wondering that myself for 8 yrs!" she giggled through her tears of joy. Johnathan pulled a ring from his pocket and looked her in the eyes "Hailey like i said 8 yrs i've been wondering these things and i don't want to wonder anymore I Love You Hailey Storm will you marry me?" she covered her mouth as the tears rolled down her cheeks and as her mind raced over all the yrs they spent together all the way up to this moment "Johnathan Lakesford i would be HONORED to marry you" he smiled at her stood up put out his hands helped Hailey up and hugged her as tight as possible...without hurting her of course he pulled her back slightly looked her in the eyes smiled brightly (: put his hands on her waist leaned down and kissed her sweetly and passionately on the lips they looked each other in the eyes moments later Hailey said very sweetly while he slid the ring onto her ring finger "Johnathan i love you" Johnathan looked at her sweetly and replied the three words she had been waiting yrs to hear " I love You Too Hailey!" Johnathan grabbed her hand a squeezed her hand lovingly as they stood under the stars together for what seemed like eternity.

Well that's my short story hope ya'll like it should i write another you be the judge....also there is some truth in this story and the names are kinda close to some other names lol (: and some of this is about what i want in the future (: